THE DELAIR MUJRIM AND THE IRON SIDE LONE HAND
Ibn Safi and Victor Gun
Original Creators, Part Two
The story begins at a dinner table where Dr. Peter Cameron is eating with Susan, whom he calls Auntie. Actually, he was called from the hospital for the operation because Cameron is a young and famous psychiatrist. He doesn't have parents; he was raised by Susan, but his tuition fees were already collected by his mother, which enabled him to get an education, and then his skills became the talk of the town.
After Cameron leaves, Susan instructs the maid to put hot water in Cameron's room for her, as she will be sleeping in Cameron's room tonight, so that her bed will be warm when he returns late. So he doesn't get cold.
Susan is murdered at night by a special type of dagger that is later traced to Karkoff, a circus dagger thrower, and when Ironside Zawar goes to investigate, Jonny Lister goes to investigate. He is killed by a dagger from the back of the tent. During the investigation on the night of the murder, the maid says that she was woken up by the sound of the door at night, and she suspected that it was the person watching over their chickens. Further, she states that all she heard from Susan's room was "Go to Streatham" (that's the name of the place or person), Streatham/Streatham. Further investigation Inspector Ironsides claims that the attack was on Dr. Cameron. But Sue falls victim to his bed and gives Cameron a pistol for protection, instructing him to be careful. During this investigation, there are Cameron, the police, the maid, the Ironsides, and a neighbour of theirs. Meanwhile, Cameron explains that he had a problem with a Yugoslavian or Croatian due to an activity at the hospital the previous day and later discovers that the man of the same nationality is an expert at throwing daggers.
Ironsides arrives at the circus with Jonny Lister, where, after being seduced by Karkov in a dagger-throwing show, he retreats to his tent, and Ironsides, with the help of the circus manager, arrives to talk to him, the real culprit. He is about to tell him that he was killed by stabbing him in the back.
Ironsides and Jonny Lister "Go to Streatham" (that's the name of the place or person). Streatham Prize, which is Lord Streatham's mansion where the ailing Lord Streatham and his family, Lady Fremont, are staying. daughter Jon and nephew Freddie live. Upon entering the castle, Jon mistakes Ironsides for a reporter, but Freddie recognises him, after which Ironsides reveals that he is interested in Lord Stratum's mind or mental illness and that brains preserved in alcohol are kept in his laboratory. As he leaves the palace, he is shot, after which he meets Professor Rath, who is apparently insane, suffering from psychosis, and living in a lofty observatory built by Mensch, where he has also fitted a pair of binoculars. He has kept and continues to conduct violent experiments on animals. Ironsides takes the gun from her and checks to see that it is locked. The professor's personality changes from moment to moment. Meanwhile, Freddy arrives and takes the Ironsides with him.
Along the way, the Ironsides meet a man named Tim who seems fed up with the Stratum family. Then he meets the Stratum family doctor and asks why Lord Stratum's mental illness is not being operated on. The doctor reveals that there is a psychiatrist, Hunter Jameson, who is holding back the operation, and then he shows Ironsides the letter that Lord Stratum wrote to the doctor; one corner of the letter is torn. Ironsides suggests that he call Dr. Cameron to treat Lord Stratum, to which the doctor hesitates, saying that it would not be possible with Dr. Hunter, but Ironsides says that Dr. Hunter is going somewhere (he is actually the one who distracts the doctor). The doctor agrees, and then he calls Dr. Cameron to treat the patient.
Ironsides shows up with Jonny out of town on another case.
Hardstone/Freddy reveals that he has been hit by enemy fire and leaves the scene.
Dr. Cameron checks on the patient and agrees to operate on him. Before the operation, while leaving the palace, the doctor is attacked by a poison that becomes the victim of a dog.
Before the operation, he orders his staff and supplies and also sits in the hotel and reads books related to the operation. On the way back to the palace for the operation, an attempt is made to hang him with the help of a rope, from which Ironsides, in the form of Tim, saves him but does not appear before him.
Before the operation, the stratum family's doctor asks Freddy if the power system is secure or not; if the power goes out during the operation, the patient may die. Rath tells Freddy that special stars have been seen, which angers Freddy, and Rath takes him unconscious, imprisons him in a tower, and confesses all the crimes to Freddy while watching the operation through a telescope. also accepts and then reveals himself as Ironsides, while also telling us that Freddy's Iqbal crime record has also been recorded. The files section for the later and earlier stories will contain the novel.
Comparison
In the writing so far, change the names of the characters from "Lone Hands" to "Brave Criminals" in the fictional characters. The rest of the story is the same. It should be remembered that this is Victor Gunn's fifth novel; that is, his characters were created before this adopted novel, while this is Ibn Safi's first copied novel.
From Ibn Safi's pen to Victor Gunn's writing, there is no major change except for a few scenes, imagery, and two or three secondary characters. Filmgoers will be able to understand this easily because nowadays there is a fashion for remakes in which a few scenes or half of the story is changed and the rest is the same. For Ibn Safi, the fashion for remakes is old. He added an extra chapter or two that, despite its inclusion, somehow resembled the old story. Even the scenes and main characters of this novel have not changed; only the names have changed. Victor Gunn's IronSides became Ibn Safi's HardStone, and Jonny Lister became Sajid Hameed. Victor Gunn's Professor Rath, Ibn Safi's Professor Imran, and Freddy as Kanwar Salim Dr. Cameron became Dr. Shaukat, and even Dr. Cameron and Lady Jane were paired in Victor Gunn's Novel, as were Dr. Shaukat and Najma in Ibn-e-Safi. To me, more than 80% of the novel is a translation because not only the plot is taken without permission, but the characters names have been changed. And the things that Victor Gunn explained, Ibn-e-Safi wrote briefly (to me, this difference does not count); for example, Victor Gunn prolonged the conflict between Ironsides and Freddy in the last two or three chapters, and Freddy died like this. That he died by his own hands, while Ibn Safi shortened the conflict and killed Salim at the hands of Faridi. In one of Ibn-e-Safi's translations, it is related that Sherlock Holmes was translated into Islam, while according to the novel "Lone Hands", Victor Gunn's novels and characters were translated into Urdu. The second difference is the presence of secondary characters or not, the third difference is to have a few situations according to the area of the genre.
Talk of "stealing chickens" in reference to a man who broke into Dr. Cameron's house at night
Ironsides giving a pistol to Dr. Cameron or Freddie to Shaukat
(both) the arrival of the inspector by his manager after the dagger thrower's mistake at the circus and his murder
Looking at Ironside's photo on the stairs at Stratum Mansion/Faridi at Nawab Wajahat's Mansion
Cromwell's attack on Faridi and meeting Professor Rath or Imran
Poisoned needle and attempted execution on Cameron and Shaukat
Freddy's use of Professor Rath and Salem's use of Professor Imran
Cameron's successful operation at Lord Stratum and Shaukat's Nawab of Wajahat
Becoming Professor Rath/Imran of Cromwell/Freidi
In the final scenes, Freddy and Salem's psychological manipulation, seduction, and trapping tactics are also copied from Cromwell's. (Do not mix Freddy and Freddy.)
Freddy/Salem's End: In Lone Hands, this is done by Professor Wrath, and Freddy, who is about to throw the poisoned needle at Cameron, silently falls victim to his own needle, and Lord Stratum's operation succeeds. In the daring criminal, Salim throws a poisonous needle at Shaukat during the operation, and Faridi shoots him. Despite the sound of the bullet, the most delicate operation of the brain is quietly successful without stopping.
Simply put, it's replicated with light makeup. Such a copy, which, instead of being mentioned and acknowledged in the first novel, Ibn-e-Safi mentioned in his one hundred and second novel long after establishing the foundation of Jasoosi Dunya and Imran Serizi, must have been the reason for the readers reaction.
